Rolling, rotund, rubenesque
bouncing, balls of bland air.
Standing, smiling serenely,
stopping to silently stare.
Fragile, free-floating froth
airly ascends above as a moth.
Innocently isolated illusions;
capricious; careen in collusion.
Polished pearlescent propulsion;
effervescence ends in explosion.
Author notes
Who knows?
A contest entry
- Quickie: Bubbles by Folklor.
600 points, ended June 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wordsmith
Greetings, I thought I'd return the favor, I'm glad I did.
Excellent poem, outstandingly beautiful words.
Wolf
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Thank you. I have a very eclectic range of subjects. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow !! I loved the wordin in this piece you are soooo good at the verbals my friend.
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I am glad you liked it. I had fun with the alliteration.
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*blows grape-flavored bubble gum* Have I mentioned I love bubbles?
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mmmmmmmmmmmm blowing bubbles? fresh and frothy......?
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I take my lemonade the same way you said above
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I will have lemonade and chocolate cake for you.
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Now this is alliteration pulled off superbly, with natural rhyme. Fantastic language use in this one, good write.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
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'Fragile, free-floating froth
airly ascends above as a moth.
Innocently isolated illusions;'
This was alliteration in triad heaven! loved your descriptions so natural and luxurious with language! each word was perfectly placed. The descriptions were fantastic the end was explosive XD and the bit I picked out for me was the best part of the poem. the fricative language and the description and similarity to a moth was genius. well done loved this poem. -
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I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for reading and commenting. I enjoyed the contest.
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Excellent
Heavens to Betsy, all of those $.75 words (lol), I don't know quite what to say except that it brought a smile to my face. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme were just fine.
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Haha. That will the judge to ask me for alliteration.
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I'm glad you enjoyed my little joke. The challenge for all of us world be to use this word in a poem: antidisistablishmentarism.
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=antidissistablishmentarianism
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I don't know why, but for some reason, I think of a really great cappuccino. It's energetic, satisfying, and it completely brightens your day. This is what your writing does. It's such a good caffeine high.
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Thank you. I am glad you found it to be a pick me up. It is a very sweet compliment.
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Wow Chucks I'll never look at bubbles the same way again! What an airy, wonderful feel to this. Now I wanna go blow some..bubbles that is!!!!
Great write my friend. I wish you all the luck.
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Thanks for reading and commenting. The alliteration makes it almost too much, but.... it is all in fun.
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