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Bobbles (Alliteraku)

Buoyant bubbles
Billowing, bouncing, bursting
Beahty beholden

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  • Folklor
    June 16, 2008

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    oooohhhh!
    fantastic alliteration! you really captured the movement here. very impressed.
    best description was your triad on the second line and the word beholden very nicely ended.