The appearance of my body, in collar and chains,
numb with anticipation, zealous for your caress.
Lighting the fire within, watching you undress,
lips graze flushing skin, feelings are restrained.
Heat reflects heat, naked desire leads,
we follow, losing all inhibitions.
Locked in rapturous embrace, animal needs,
engaging in several positions.
A silky soft palm presses firm hardness,
stroking, caressing, until it stands
Your tender wetness yields to hard, warm hands,
bodies acting as one, we are possessed.
Earnest breath on my neck, hands kneading breasts,
taut nipples twisted between hot fingers.
Sweat glistening on each of our bare chests,
sensual kisses, the feeling lingers.
Manhood pressing urgently, demanding,
needing entry, craving attention.
Ravage this body, make my heart sing
lay me down on petal covered satin.
Taste me, consume me with your thirsty lips.
sip of me, take my heated body now.
Into the forest a hardened blade does plow,
both hands grab a hold of full willing hips.
Screaming out savagely, lost in the rush,
finding ourselves unable to relax.
Excitement mounting with each passioned touch,
bringing both to a shuddering climax.
Author notes
This was and is still origanlly posted as intimate unions, recently had a contest asking for people to butt in and collaborate their efforts into it etc...Scott, http://allpoetry.com/Griswold, was the winner and this is now a collaborated effort between me, scott and my ap hubby Joe
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What to say about this....HOT!! picture presentation and steamy words can together for great affect. Loved your phrasing and descriptions here. Lover's lost in the moment!! well done!
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HOT is how I would put it too hehehe, glad you liked this one
Cin
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Gulp!!!!!
Very erotic sis!!! Having been in this position myself in the past I can quite honestly say... YEEHAW!!!!
Love it!
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u naughty sister of mine
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Thanks SiS, yeehaw indeed hehehe
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NICE!!! very sensual and enticing!!! Love the background and the pic...sets the mood for this heated exchange!!! WONDERFUL...Blessed be~
Aunty Az
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Very nicely done, and very hot. I am impressed by the collaboration and the quality results which come from it. Once again, a delight to read and thanks for sharing. Nicely done by all 3 of you!
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Now this is hot..a threesome! (IN penning) LOL 'Into the forest a hardened blade does plow" is a terrific metaphor and not at all cliched! Nice to read erotica with seeing the same words. I'm having trouble figuring who wrote which line! Last line is good, but meter is off. I like the use of rhyme in this. Each stanza was great, until the last line where the meter was rocky. To have three in collab, this is really great! I love collabs, too! Kudos to all.
Linda
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Thanks Linda
yeh the who wrote what is a hard one lol..cause it was a collab between me and my ap hubby from ages ago...i could easily show what scott added in but my the origanal effort i couldnt tell you whats mine and his lol
yeah im with you on the ending, it does feel a little abrupt...i will have a look at it, sometime soon, not feeling so good right now
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It was fun to throw my rhyming two cents worth into your already wonderful piece. Thank you for the opportunity to do so...Scott
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Glad you wanted to, cant wait till hubby is back online and gets to see it
Cin
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Wow... what a three-some
(the collaboration, of course )Wildly erotic and sensual... a wonderful fantasy of lust and passion... Well done - all of you.
Ken
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Thanks Ken
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