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Mystic Tint.

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Blush pink tinge,
softened aura
tipped gently,
lovingly,
wild silken whispers,
fragranced with passion,
fragile form
rests languid,
upon thorny frame.
Hidden depths deeply
touched,
caressed,
adored.
Masquerading beauty
carries dignity gracefully,
such aplomb.
Fine feathers droop,
age advances bringing
stark stems,
denuded,
unloved,
forgotten.
Ripe buds blossom
as curtain rises,
youth steps forward,
catwalk displays
nature's regal blooms.
Once more highlighted,
perfumed silence
dances.
silhouetted acclaim,
accolades ringing,
poised perfectly,
Rose tinted.

 

 

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  • zochit2me gold member
    July 31

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    A well thought out and shaped poem.
    Simply beautiful in its entirety. Keep writing and delivering beauty in your words!

    ☼Becky

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    • cutiepie gold member
      August 1
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      Thank you for your lovely comments as always very much appreciated

  • crazymomma
    July 7

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    Each and every word seemed so well placed and thought out here. You have painted a lovely picture with your words. The imagery was amazing. Thanks for sharing

    • cutiepie gold member
      July 7
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      I am delighted that you enjoyed this poem. Many thanks for your kind comments

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 6

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    you are painting the nature by your words..and skethcing the beauty through the tone and the flow of your wonderful poetry..well done...

  • falling1isfatal2
    June 30

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    "Masquerading beauty
    carries dignity gracefully,"

    Too me that was the most beautiful line in a very beauty-filled write. The words were so well choosen and mesh through out so perfectly that the beauty you were trying to portray was jsut magnified, thanks for sharing this I love it

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    • cutiepie gold member
      July 2
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      Thank you for your lovely comments, as always, very much appreciated
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