Why can't dreams be real?
Everyone will dream
Of a life they would like
But why don't they come true?
Good dreams never come true
But the bad ones always do
Are dreams just lies
We think of in the night?
Are dreams just fairytales
We make up in our minds?
Are dreams real in our lives
Or are they just non-existant in life?
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nicely written -
This was sad. I'm sure some can relate. You did a good job. It was short, but it said a lot. Thanks for entering and Good luck in my contest.
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It's a funny thing about dreams, we have to work for them to come true. Nothing is given to us in this world. Thank you so much for entering and best of luck to you in the contest... Scott
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Very nice write,
Thanks for entering.
Good luck. -
'Are dreams just fairytales
We make up in our minds?'
I really like this questioning.
thanks for taking the time to enter,
good luck.
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Thought Provoking
This was very thought provoking!! well done, I beleive dreams are a way God communicates to us, you did good work here! try using meter and rhyme a little more, I'm a sucker for those devices
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