Hands chained
To the walls of his prison.
He feels enclosed within his own tomb!
Yet
Though his hands are tightly restrained
The prisoner still struggles
To free Himself of his inner pains
Of agony and defeat.
but
Seeing a light...
Just beyond his reach
The Prisoner regains new hope!
Author notes
unfinisihed
A contest entry
- WOW YOU WON'T BELIEVE THIS!!! by elmundopasa1.
300 points, ended July 4, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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well even unfinished, this piece was great. just what i was looking for. not cliche and trite, but very true and real. thanks for entering.
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wow!!!
good luck in the contest!!
woooo
that is awesome dude!!!!!!
no really
it is!!
OMG I LOVE THAT PIC!! HOLY SHOES THIS IS GREAT POEM!! U MUST BE A SMOOTH WRITIN SUN OF A GUN
lol
hope that didn't seem mean
i ment that in my country girl way
lol
sorry
haha
great poem
really awesome
really realy awesome!!!
SilverWolf
ps i gunna favorite this -
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Reaching....
Your comment on my poem, Reaching for the Light, is not mean..I appreciate it! However, I have a question for you.
Should I leave it as it is or add a line or two about the light he sees??? yuor also one of the first to bookmark this as a favorite..Thanks again!!!!
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Though the hands are tightly bound, the soul struggles to be free...within oneself the pain does burn of agony and defeat...when all thought is of loss a little hope of light comes through...sighs...wow, you have matched words and picture so very well...winner wrote all over it:f:f:f
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GREAT ONE DAVID! Can't wait for the ending in this. It sounds like this prisoner is trying to regain his freedom. THANKS!!
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