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Irony





In exquisite irony
passion premeditated
mockery constant to transform
as a clown
crown aluminium on skull,
lapels decorated geranium
like arrows in my cranium...

as breeze of a dress unmeasured.















Author notes

Prmpt: geranium in my cranium

30 words

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  • Lady Eventide
    June 15, 2008
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    Ooh. Lovely. Excellent choice of words. Loved the use of double p words in line 2. Good luck.