Fiery enthusiasm
Shows like flames
Doing a ceremonial dance
In and around the cauldron.
Fire rules,
The heart
Where passion,
Deeply ignites.
Warm with a spark
Devouring everything it touches
Untamable, with no surprise
Untouchable, but admired and deeply desired
Enjoy the warmth and love, fire gives
Within the flames
Motivated by the special light
Giving out its divine radiance
Like the illuminating firefly,
Who sparkle and dances in the night sky
Defying gravity, while bringing magick
And imagination into life.
Fire is free and fearless
A powerful life source for all to enjoy
Leaving a piece of magick and laughter
For those who have been touched.
Signifying the forces of the spirit,
The one with an adventurous soul;
Passionate, emotional and wild,
Flammable through its powerful emerging strength.
Author notes
My third poem about fire, I find it deeply inspiring maybe because fire is my element. Fire is the most powerful element. --- http://allpoetry.com/poem/4328461
A contest entry
- The Elements: Round 1 by Ink4Blood.
900 points, ended June 30, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Tell me what you think, honestly
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Fire..Fire....Fire
Passionate, emotional and wild,
Flammable through its powerful emerging strength." Fire in desire, Fire in courage,Fire of the soul,....everything givs us warmth when cold is fire. Fire extinguishes hot desire without any fire extinguishers!Fire in you of love is much appreciated by me, dear swet Chris. Thank you for all your comments and sweet words that reached me like written words.with love
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Hope that sheds a little light on that for you, lol.. :"
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The Purely.Digital is about being seduced by demons.. the dark side of things.. having a relationship with the devil.. then always having to look over your shoulder for the choices you made, for the things you let yourself succumb to..
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yes that did shed some light on things. I'm glad that was clear... I had other things in mind. but it was somewhat the same. lol.
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Fire Firey.. very cool. You're good at this stuff, :
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only when I'm inspired about something.
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nice imagery
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I agree, fire is the most powerful element. I just have to say thanks, for that fact that you spelled magick with a (k). Lol I truly enjoyed your poem, especially the "illuminating firefly". Great write and nice job.
Bloody wishes
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Wonderful
It was full of imagination and imagery but may i suggest spell checking it there a some typos. Other than that I truly enjoyed reading this. ~mandie~ -
A vibrant write about one of the elements, indeed ^^; I pretty much like all the elements but I think wind is the strongest 0.o
Anyway, good write about describing fire
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Water is my element as far as I know because I am cancer of the 6th month in the calendar year. I like this write it was well done. I like it alot it says so much about fire. Thank you for sharing
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Your punctuation here"
"Fire rules,
The heart
Where passion,
Deeply ignites."
doesn't make much sense to me. This might be deliberate, but I would suggest looking over this passage anyways.
"Warm with a spark" This line isn't as strong as many of the others in this piece. I suggest removing it or editing it to make it stronger (Bang, with a spark... etc).
"Like the illuminating firefly,
Who sparkle and dances in the night sky
Defying gravity, while bringing magick
And imagination into life."
I would end here. You could move this stanza to the end, or edit the last stanza to strengten it, but this one feels much more final than the one you have ending the piece right now.
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