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Pollinated Rainbows

Delicate;
especially when passed
from fingertip to fingertip.

Crushed;
beneath painted toenails
pollen creates mosaics
on weeping grass.



Affection paints itself
in rainbows,
waiting to be entwined
in lovers palms.



Author notes

Because everyone loves flowers...
and flowers are like hearts,
easily broken.


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  • ea silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    This is an example of where I think shaving a couple words, for instance, "especially" would strengthen this piece.

  • aaaaaaaa
    June 19, 2008
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    love it.


  • They Say Shannon
    June 15, 2008

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    This is beautiful.
    Stunning. Inspiring, even.

    I adore it.
    So much. It's so delicate and gorgeous.

    Ah!

    I just, love it! Darling, gorgeous!
    <3


  • Lady Eventide
    June 15, 2008

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    Oh, wow. Really pretty. I love what you did with the prompt. Great imagery. Good luck. Everyone loves flowers. Definitely agree.