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Rose

I lost her
          in a different universe
I can go anywhere,
          but never there

I have played
          with the sands of time
I can manipulate
          everything but her

I am as old
        as the worlds that I visit
She was as young
        as a just-unfurled flower
And yet for some reason
        despite all my reason
Though everything dies
        but me

I know
      I'll remember
Though bonds
      may be severed
I'll remember
      her
For all of the 'forever'
    I'll see.

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  • fullfathomfive
    June 15, 2008
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    thank you both for your generous comment! xxxfff


  • Aerden gold member
    June 15, 2008
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    Rose and the original new Doctor are my favorites. I like this uncluttered, heartfelt poem.


  • MrCrepsley
    June 15, 2008

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    Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way you have put yourself in the Doctor's shoes. Luv the background because that sets the mood. Thank you and good luck