Yem's work,
oft' the quote of
lunatic and madman.
A shocking tale of horror told.
Save us!
A contest entry
- Cinquain by Yemassee.
554 points, ended June 21, 2008, 23 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha ha
I'm glad this humorous piece was recognized for its talent as well. It succinctly shares knowledge of Yem's style! Awe a cinquain takes a mind that can really see the much and put it in the small. ! -
AMEN!
SOS Savor our Stories! The Yem he is a clever one no?? muhahahha
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I think the yam man has an idealistic view on life...laugh at it, with it and at yourself...it's a sad world we live in and honestly if we can't smile...we are doomed...perhaps we can have him throw us a life saver
Mal
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... and the Maine point is?
why do we subject ourselves to the abuse? I must agree 'SAVE US' ... joy I applaud you for mentioning it with your entry!
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Hey, I've been insulted! Or I would be if it weren't true.
Oh my, that is going to be a hard reputation to live up to! I mean, lunatic and madman, that is like calling a normal person intelligent and talented...I feel the need to explode something...or shave my head or...oh wait, you said madman, not weirdo.
Your entry is a Shocking Cinquain of Truth!
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is that the great lasagna god of the north?
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LOL Good one!!!
Must be something in that Moxie soda, some weird ingredient.
This entry made me laugh out loud!
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