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unrealized images
thoughts prop up,
surface floats it,
try propelling on calm sea

wind drifts them
reaching fancied shores,
epic of eternal tussle,
between dreams within,
clashes deft resistance without

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to Mamatha 'Dear friend'

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  • whos my humblepie
    July 5, 2008

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    mmph, a tussle.
    sure does cause a rumble within me.
    this is so...good.
    To bad I can't credit you again.


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    surface floats it,
    try propelling on calm sea

    wind drifts them
    reaching fancied shores,
    epic of eternal tussle,
    between dreams within,
    clashes deft resistance without beautiful good luck in the contest


  • whos my humblepie
    June 15, 2008
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    Hmmm...
    so you's liken me a bit huh?
    Oh, your so sweet!