unrealized images
thoughts prop up,
surface floats it,
try propelling on calm sea
wind drifts them
reaching fancied shores,
epic of eternal tussle,
between dreams within,
clashes deft resistance without
Author notes
to Mamatha 'Dear friend'
A contest entry
- i dont know by DemonSpit.
702 points, ended September 14, 81 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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mmph, a tussle.
sure does cause a rumble within me.
this is so...good.
To bad I can't credit you again.
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surface floats it,
try propelling on calm sea
wind drifts them
reaching fancied shores,
epic of eternal tussle,
between dreams within,
clashes deft resistance without beautiful good luck in the contest

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Hmmm...
so you's liken me a bit huh?
Oh, your so sweet!



