Your words
caress my smile.
A warm touch on my lips
and tender feeling in my heart,
teasing...
Author notes
JFTJOI
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquain by Yemassee.
554 points, ended June 21, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I remember I've seen this JFTJOI quite a few times in the past, and I know I was always wondering my ass off just to know what it could possibly mean...
I think I still don't know
or I must have forgotten it 
sigh ...
Love... I'd rather fall in love with birdshit for the moment - it falls (back) on you and at least it wouldn't lie about it...
Anyway, I'm not able to make sense around that subject
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JFTJOI just for the joy of it (non entry). I don't care about trophies, even use a gold member feature to hide them from my Mari's page. Still I like enter some contests ....I do like getting green trophies to this account though, they look good on my green page
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came back to read again... lovely and soft, a delight over and again...h
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nice caressing words of work from a generously fine artist of thought and word.
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yeah the power of words but with this it is more of magic of words...yes caressing is an apt title for this...
and this when mmmmmmmm...is all i can say
cause i get lost in your words
Anna Lee
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Lovely poetry...i am amazed by how much expression can be done with only twenty two syllables...h
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A very lovely and romantic cinquain you have written here.. Beautiful and heartwarming!!
I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jasminerose
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I've been there ...
and so I applaud you for these sweet thoughts squeezed into the form! Nice! joy
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The power of words,
well controlled by you!
Superb!
M-C
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Ah..you are taouching the sentiments of love around your words..eternal touches are here..well done......thank you so much for sharing it.....
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Okay, I was wrong. At least one person on AllPoetry can write a Cinquain.
Thank you for entering.
Please read my cinquain, but I won't return the favor, I am a very busy man. I don't have time to return favors, or even acknowledge your comment, so please do not expect an applause. Now off with you to read my Cinquain.
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Two words for you...
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Thank you for reading my cinquain. I commented here so everyone who reads your poem can see how magnanimous I am...but I still won't return the favor.
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It has too many lines, too many syllables...
Ah, it's you of course, all the classic elements, Gaze-esque.
Words have that power, written and spoken, of course knowing you, you might mean "words" as a kiss. That the words touching the lips is actually the kiss, expressing, teasing...a prelude to greater words, longer sentences...extending my strained metaphor.
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