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Simple Truth I suppose

We sit in wait,
wondering what the world will deliver.
Is it really worth it to hate?
Ongoing questions that give us a shiver.

Haunting memories of an unmissed past,
never wanting to look back at what was there.
Like a dark spell ready to be cast,
we'll sit and rot in dispair.

Sounds that chill our soul,
and the love that warms our bones.
Our eyes black as coal,
voices like painful moans.

We look into the dark,
waiting for the light.
All it takes is a simple spark,
to set fire to this dreadful fright.

So to all of those loathing and waiting,
I say to you now there is no debating.
This pain is real that we're creating,
there's no more use in all this hating.



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  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 13

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    I love this one! Now this could be a song very easily...hate is not needed and this is a well written piece of truth...
    excellent work!

  • I enjoyed the ending. I don't usually like rhyming but this was great. xx

  • mrs. random silver member
    June 18

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    *whispers*
    Defenitely one of your best pieces of work on AP. The ending was amazing. VERY well done my friend.

    Mylee

  • arafura
    June 15
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    Very well written as usual my friend. This is one of your best I think. BRAVO!

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