Words to me, are oh so sweet;
when they come from a man of truth.
You hear the words, he feels so true;
they means the world to you and him.
The day it ends and falls apart
all she has is empty words.
She trys to listen, to other men.
The words they say, don't mean the same.
They make her cry; to get some peace.
She mean nothing to them
and starts to cry.
She waits for the words,
to heal her heart.
She runs to him
and falls apart.
He says the words to make her smile.
Continuting on, he gets her back.
She learns from him;
words are plenty.
A contest entry
- Round 2 of 3 by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended June 28, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Words with meaning - full of truth makes a world of difference. Those who'se words are empty can never understand what value they lose.
Congrats on making it to the 2nd round.
Best of luck to you,
Florida Sunshine
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Wow! this was an amazing poem!
very powerful and I can tell it came straight from your heart. I really loved this and I hope maybe you could comment some of mine too!
thanx!
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