And as I lay in bed I think
Of how it might've been
Without this fear, without this pain,
Without this war to win
For if that dragon had not come
Or if Bard had not struck it well
Then we might not be so subject
To this slippery, greedy pit of Hell
And as I lay in bed I think
Of how it might've been
To be back in my old Baggins life...
I'll not go there again.
Author notes
Option #2
Lord of the Rings geeks unite <3
A contest entry
- Quotes that mean alot to me by InMyOwnGlassBox.
600 points, ended June 22, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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Congrats on the bronze. After reading a few of these, I wanna just excape to Middle Earth..
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Cute. Congrats on the well earned Bronze. Made me miss my hobbit friend, Bilbo.
Nice bit of hobbit nostalgia.
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Wow, this was quite, wow. I can't be blown away easily, yet you have. thank you for entering!
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Cool poem Meredith!
*KT*
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Wow! this was an amazing poem!
very powerful and I can tell it came straight from your heart. I really loved this and I hope maybe you could comment some of mine too!
thanx!
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