Terminal utopian glimmer in ephemeral past faded.
Yet the charitable purpose vibrant and serene in thirst.
A life evanescently burning out the scintillation for respiration.
Importance once disposed the prospect for expansion,
Now buries inward suffocations grasp into solitude.
Diurnal remission recedes the internal belief,
As inattentive toils stray cerebration from the purposeful pretense.
I desist strive internally for each stab at conceivable,
Subsequently promises omission.
Author notes
Picture Credit: Unknown
Option 5
Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me
In a list
A contest entry
- What do you think? {options} by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great poem i liked it alot short but it had alot of emotion in it. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
cleverly written
and painfully illustrated the depths of agony!
ouch...well done!
I did miss your eloquence of feeling and scent in this
though. Did this prompt come to close.....you chose to
sneak behind your words. It's a masterful poem, it's I
do this when I don't really want to dive into the
prompt. could have been a long day at work possibly.
ears/Seattle
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