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broken flesh






...And yesterday
I hurriedly skipped through
fallen leaves
that sank deep inside my garden
far beneath my fleeting skin ~

counting all the many ways
around our Autumn love...

I tripped

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"reflections of a broken past... reflected in pieces of shattered glass"

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  • Fallen Grace silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    This is wonderful! It fits perfect with the prompt! You did a great job, good luck in the contest!

    -♥
    Beautifully-Bound