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Shattered Time Warp

Broken shards of time,
lay in reflective debris.
Mercury laced portals
of forgotten time-space,
reanimating bitter chronologic
sorrow of yester-years personas.
Hollow glass tears,
Became keys back too darkened days

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  • Fallen Grace silver member
    June 17, 2008

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    This poem is really amazing! I love it, you did a wonderful job! Your vocabulary is excelent as is your style of writing.

    Great job and good luck in my contest!

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    Beautifully-Bound