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shadow wings


shadow wings
flash on the water
    soar away

A contest entry

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  • marlene47 silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Very interesting, the shadow of the wings moving across the water. My dogs like to chase them too.
    Marlene


  • Swan song gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    very good breif with strong imagery


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 17, 2008
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    A moment captured, perfectly.

    Aesthete


  • Nikki Rowles
    June 15, 2008
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    so shourt but sooooo touching...this ia very well written haiku.......good luck in the contest


  • KayJay
    June 14, 2008
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    Nice imagery... Well done and best of luck...
    Ken

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