Swallowed by feigned laughter,
and overwhelmed by your power;
I remind myself this is not amazing,
this is not to mesmerize...
You steer away this love,
leaving only hate inside;
you are no God to favor me!
you are but sheer evil itself...
And there must be dirt in the eye,
I was blind, you're not beautiful;
A coward that dares to soar, is all you are..
Victim of your disorientation,
well consumed by the sorrow;
accidentally became your janitor;
cleaning up after you messed up...
The thrust you inflicted me with,
now weakens my heart,
There's no more light, no more radiance,
that can elude this overbearing pain.
Must I remember this is for good?
The flight I hoped for is no longer my escape...
All this game fate played,
supposedly serves me to be strong...
Must I implode by your presence?
But you're just the mere shadow of regret...
I unleashed the missle,
destined to purify your soul;
making screams oblivious,
while thunder silences the voices.
All remaining memories,
play like a video inside my mind...
Assaulting me... convoking me I have no family...
And that a beam of hope,
lied inside a rose,
that was tangled around
a band...
~♥~
Author notes
Used every word...
Did my best!
XXVampireeyesXX
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF...WORD BANK.......... by Talking Toni.
475 points, ended June 28, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - [[ I wish i had a cookie]] For All by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
430 points, ended June 18, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gimme what you got!! by Sketchin.
300 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Never Again Will This Hurt Me
Comments
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wow very impressive, your words are very deep.....thank you for entering, i wish you luck.
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Wow this is really good
very well written
i like it alot
good job
thanks for entering my contest
good luck
for you
xxx--<3--
Shelly -
WOW.... You are such an amazing poet...I am in awe. This poem has so many concepts that I find magnificent and so well described that it will take forever to share my thoughts of them...but one that really hit me was:
The flight I hoped for is no longer my escape...
All this game fate played,
supposedly serves me to be strong...
We all do turn away and try to get over things, to move on, to get away...but in the end it does not feel like an escape at all, but a prison where you are stuck in a state of mind. I do not know how you find such words and arrange them so beautifully to create a picture for us of your pain and of situations...
And there must be dirt in the eye,
I was blind, you're not beautiful;
A coward that dares to soar, is all you are..
That last line is very powerful. More often than we'd like we are blinded to see who a person really is, whether for the better, or for the worse...
I am amazed sis. Such dark and deep poems. I've missed out on a lot!
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Yeah, You SUre DId............
I keep getting pleasantly surprised by the entries and the way you can create your own creations from words that I chose...This was very detailed and good use of the wordbank.Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~
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