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Take Me Away

All of my life
I've waited for someone like you
To take me away

My knight in shining armor
On a big white steed
Come to take his princess home

And suddenly, there you were
Only fairy tales aren't quite so simple
So here I sit

A patient princess
Who ever waits
To be swept off her feet
And taken away

Away
To lands of cotton candy clouds
And castles made of cheese
A land where all the wrongs are right
And breeze blows through the trees

So, my prince
Take me away

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  • Candyknife gold member
    July 19, 2008
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    cute

    was a bit cliche but toward the end it lightened up and gave a nice bit of personality


  • Paril
    June 15, 2008
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    Very nice. Cotton candy clouds <3

    -Jon