regarded in shards
the light traced
a beacon
over a dusty
bedroom
black
blue
red
raced
across
your heart
you shivered
in the limelit
mirror
you didn't
like being
exposed.
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Are you up for it? by Fallen Grace.
600 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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holy cripes. you just kinda threw it out there in yer face didn't you? I love it. Great idea on breaking up the lines (much like all your work) but i really like the single worded lines. Great effect
mylee -
This is a wonderfully written poem. I truly enjoy the format and what you wrote about. Great job and good luck in the contest!
-♥
Beautifully-Bound
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