Trying to forget broken yesterdays
walking a road of broken dreams
holding onto what I have
my glass heart has shattered
cutting my hands so deep...
I'm leaking old memories.
A contest entry
- Quickie:: Are you up for it? by Fallen Grace.
600 points, ended June 18, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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I can relate. Thiis is superb writing here. It is deep and very emotional on all sort of levels for me. I am glad that this won a trophy. It deserved to. Well done for this.
Dark Love
Wayne Leon
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Wonderful! Aboslutly amazing! I can relate to what you've written here, it's a really touching poem.
Great job and good luck in the contest!
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Beautifully-Bound -
This is such a sad piece but it is really well written sweety you did a very nice job on this and I am very proud of you mommy loves you loads
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wow this sounds like me....very well written keep writing...good luck with teh contest
~*~Lauren~*~ -
Beautiful... Short, simple, and eloquent.
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