afterwards

and I choke.

A contest entry

I Want Three Words by February Moon. 1700 points, ended June 26, 2008, 71 entries
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February Moon
June 26, 2008
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I loved this.

Kari
June 15, 2008

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*gasps* Wow, those are very three strong words. I could almost feel me choking. Intense!
Good luck in the contest

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