You say the words,
The words that crush my heart,
and tears stream down my face.
You tell me to get mad,
But what does mad feel like?
I have forgotten how to feel,
how to smile, how to laugh.
Now, they’re all a façade,
Just to act normal, to act plain,
To camouflage into this world.
I no longer have a say in things,
I have lost all feeling.
All I feel now is hurt, pain, and lastly, sorrow
These are the only genuine parts in me left.
I am an empty shell
Without a soul that was once you.
I am numb.
Author notes
just my muse. Nothing else...I hope. I also hope that this moment won't come to me in real life ever.
A contest entry
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forgotten how to feel
i hope this really does never happen to you -
just sad
One becoming part the whole and forgotten.
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dramatic
powerful words and images
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I have forgotten how to feel,
how to smile, how to laugh.
Now, they’re all a facade,
Just to act normal, to act plain,
To camouflage into this world.
That's my favorite verse in the poem! This poem is totally awesome! I love the feeling that it has and the way that it has the ability to move someone. I hope to see more good poetry from you and to see you around. I always have contests going on, you should enter a poem sometime. I am pretty sure that you will win some!
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you see
i felt like that before its horable good poem
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