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Occaisonally Our Eyes Meet





The whole drive home, we
stare out of our windows, caught
in awkward silence
   
 


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  • A Citys Ember
    July 9, 2008
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    what ?


  • Swan song gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    good haiku i could see and feel this


  • Shancy Fayre
    June 19, 2008

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    I like this a lot. Not just because it says a lot with few words but because I've been there. Very good choice of words. Nice haiku. Shancy.


  • mickyD503
    June 15, 2008
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    I'm assuming by the title, not so often!

  • boring brunette
    June 15, 2008
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    cool

    me and my mom do that


  • KayJay
    June 14, 2008
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    A more modern form, still satisfying and well written... Well done. Best of luck,
    Ken

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