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[piercing eagle scream]




piercing eagle scream

slicing the air with his catch

sashimi tonight













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  • sailor ptolema
    June 23, 2008

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    ohh!
    love this!
    very creative!
    congrats on the gold!!!

    ~s.p.


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    Yayyyy congrats om your gold Told you it was great!
    Gaylene


    • marlene47 silver member
      June 23, 2008
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      Thank you. You never know though how others will react, it's got to hit them just right... a personal thing.
      Marlene


  • sheltered
    June 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    Love the way this flows and shows.


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    June 23, 2008

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    Well Done Congrats on the gold !

    Dennis


  • Swan song gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    Yes!!!!


  • penman gold member
    June 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    A great haiku. so very descriptive. Best of luck in the contest.


  • peridotPixi
    June 17, 2008

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    oh i love the wonderful detials you have put into this haiku, its beautiful good luck in the contest and keep up the great writing, ~Amy

  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 15, 2008

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    Great Haiku! It's one form I cannot seem to write. You have done a wonderful piede here, with humour as a bonus
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


  • KayJay
    June 14, 2008
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    Definitely brought a smile... Well done and best of luck...
    Ken


  • james119
    June 14, 2008

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    this is a great haiku
    the balance is perfect
    nice double entendre 'piercing scream' 'slicing the air'

    sashimi

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