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Wish You Were Here






Endless waterfalls
Through cracks of a
Broken dam
Ready to burst


And I've burst...


And as fragile pieces
Litter the Earth
With the pathetic sense
That follows
I fear that I will never love again


That I will never
Be held with such
Integrity and purpose
As I have been held by
You


And as the records
Play of phantom singers
Whom we share our love
"How I wish
How I wish you were here..."







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God I just hope that what I've done hasn't caused such loss for me

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  • bananasfoster42
    August 19, 2008
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    great take on the title, thanks for the entry!

  • kales4
    June 18, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I really related to this poem. Its 90 times harder to hurt someone than to be hurt no moatter what one wishes. I wish you all the luck in the world in the conflict. Great write and good luck