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[ Baby, I'm an addiction. ]

Baby, I'm an addiction.
Delicious.
Kiss me.
I want those fistfight hands down my back.
Trace me.
Break me.
Oh I bet you wish you could.
You taste like fairydust.
Powdered sugar-powdered glass.
You told me I'm bitter.
I smell like an empty shotglass.
You drank me down.
And I'm afraid I have no cure.

Author notes

3.x] Like a baby you trusted me with everything, like pretty pills, I lured you in to screw you over.

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  • xwarriorXprincessx
    June 16, 2008

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    wow....... I like this.... alot....
    it makes me nervous...
    and slightly sexually frustrated *bites lip* hahahahaha
    cheers for that. haha


  • Kiss the girl--x
    June 14, 2008
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    'You taste like fairydust.
    Powdered sugar-powdered glass.
    You told me I'm bitter.
    I smell like an empty shotglass.'

    I love those lines, they're amazing, but I need you to put the option number, and the quote from the rules in your authors notes, finalist though
    just send me an message when you've done it