“Fuzzy and wazzy”
Endearingly “etched into my heart”
Each a precious “fuzz ball”
Who will always and “eventually”
Lite my heart with a smile
Leaving me “helpless”
“Falling” and laughing
My only “reflex”
Is to follow my heart
Into “relentless” wonder
And to find “your flame”
That lites my “Indian heart”
Trying to not become once again
“Lost within” and “thoughtless”
Or “fading” and “feeling disposed of”
But instead drown in your laughter
Like a deep “aqua” blue
And let you release me
Into your land of enchantment
A contest entry
- Previous works? Make em new. by Electric Sunrise.
380 points, ended June 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice surreal feel to it, i'm surprised at the calibur of works i'm getting already given that having to use prior titles could possibly restrict an author, but your all doing excellently so far
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i like the way you have done this it seems like a lot of this poem talks about light, it can be a postitive thing, i think this flows niceley also, good luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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