I used to be your “Pretty Woman”
“Sunbeams Shining” in my hair
When I stepped out of the “Morning Shower”
you could not keep your eyes off my body
we stared each other in the eyes during a “Romantic Interview”
“My 2 songs” played in my heart
you called me “Crinaeae Names”, they had meaning to both of us
I looked out of the window to discover a “Rainbow” with no end
trimmed with “Golden Beads” of sunlight
“☆Starley Sue” you whispered in my ear,
A tear rolled down my face
In memory of our daughter we never had
You have caused my eyes to cry “The Fountain of Pain”
My heart has been “Shattered” by the “truth”
You took your “Face Off”, the only face I knew
“You are…”
no longer “My Recipe for Love”
Author notes
using titles from my last 15 poems to make a new poem, the titles are in quotes
In Greek mythology, the Crinaeae were a type of water nymph associated with fountains.
not a true story, written for the contest only
A contest entry
- Previous works? Make em new. by Electric Sunrise.
380 points, ended June 25, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is creative...I didn't understand until I read the author notes... Good job.
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this is a smart poem, i enjoyed the read, take care
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this is a smart poem, i enjoyed the read, take care
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Excellent!
All the best in the contest,
And thanks for sharing here, pen on poetess!
Peace, Timothy x
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very well written..has a winner written all over it!!..good luck
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this is very unique. emotionally-filled and a great write
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thats really cool. i like it a lot.
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Nicely done, there was definitely some thought put into this, interesting how you could make a poem on this theme. Nicely done indeed.
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interesting
i've not seen this tittle play b4 i like it
good write thank you
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