truth
never
retreats .
Author notes
however much one wants to obscure the truth,
the truth remains.
A contest entry
- I Want Three Words by February Moon.
1700 points, ended June 26, 2008, 71 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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It's not afraid of questions, either.
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Congrats on winning the gold. These words are brilliant!
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Ok.. these are like the best three words I have ever read..lol.. You did a wonderful job.. Congratulations on winning the Gold.. Well deserved..
Angel
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Very nice and congratulations on the gold.
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Stunning, powerful, my favorite so far.
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Such a very insightful 3 words. The image is intense and works well with what is and isn't spoken. Nicely done!
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short and very true even though there wasn't many words it still is a really good write.
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a good short piece - aye you are correct, it stands tall and stands its ground and never surrenders to lies.
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Nice job. I looked at the contest and thought it was ridiculous. Now I see that you did a fine job with three words. Best of luck in the contest.
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...no, it doesn't, even when we try to hide it.
Three beautiful words. Excellent. ~Pamela
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