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My Heart


I give you my Heart
to have and to hold
are life is about to unfold.

you bring me down apound the bed and cover me with chocolate,
and lick me from head to toe and I cry for more
between my leg you go your up and down
you roll your lips over my hot fat click.

You place yourself within me I felt the Hot chocolate run down my legs,
faster and faster you pump I grab the headboard and crave you even more.

 

I give you my heart

to have and to hold

my love for you is about to explode. 

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The chocolate Heart ..

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  • Kari gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    This is a very steamy, and hot write! Hm, hot chocolate sounds really good right about now
    Thanks for your entry
    Kari


  • maralisa silver member
    June 28, 2008
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    wonderful imagery in your poem with a sensual errotic flow I loved the following lines
    I give you my Heart to have and to hold are life is about to unfold.I give you my heart to have and to hold
    my love for you is about to explode. congratulations on your shiny good luck in the contest


  • peridotPixi
    June 14, 2008
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    wow this poem is deffinatly errotic, i dont know how you got that from the choclate heart, but that means you have a wonderful imagianation, i think this poem is amazing its packed with some crazy detials thank you for your entry into my contest and good luck, as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • ckwriter69
    June 14, 2008

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    Very erotic nothing like some hot chocolate to enhance a relationship. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.