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Beauty Be -Silver

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if stars would not wear me, I would don them
rope my hair in colors of a rainbow
that does not seem to come

skin poetry

if Universe shares not jewels
I will pin as canvas
bejeweled belongings

that should be

if there be not beauty
let it be me







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photo prompt - http://www.flickr.com/photos/xinik/2491558072/

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I think she is absolutely stunning, btw.

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  • ecrivain01
    June 17, 2008

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    Quite a write ...

    and it's certainly fascinating to see how your mind works.

    Congrats on the Silver trophy too.


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 15, 2008

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    "if stars would not wear me, I would don them"

    You have your very own galaxy, my Sister. One filled with soulsongs. Beautifully stated, Sweetie. Congratulations on your new shiny. Wanda


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      June 15, 2008
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      Well...she really speaks tome, this girl.... I find her simply stunning. This is not rebellon tattooing....she is a work of art, truly.


  • BehindTheShadow
    June 15, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this one!


  • Providence
    June 15, 2008

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    Oh there is such a sense of freedom in this piece!

    Freedom from the entrapments of traditional beauty!

    Yes! Beauty be!

    Marianne


  • PageTurner
    June 15, 2008

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    You outshine the stars with your relevant rainbows, intact. In fact, you're a jewel of beauty through and through. Beauty Be... You, and that's the truth.



    Absolutely Stunning, my Friend.

    ~ Nicky♥


  • tomisb
    June 14, 2008

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    Oh this dance with the drums of beauty. The make up of the universe is now taken upon the heart when it is the soul that knows the truth.
    This made me smile for we know how beautiful the spirit is and all the rest is play.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Haley-baby1
    June 14, 2008
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    i like it

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