Blue water spurting out from within
Releasing the feelings built up
Recycling tears
Author notes
option 2
a fountian, 13 words
A contest entry
- Two Graphics - 13 Words by Kari.
430 points, ended June 14, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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very sad and short thanks for the entr
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_Yes_ Creativity / Originality
_Yes_ Imagery
_Yes_ Metaphor
_Yes_ Emotion
_Yes_ Reaction
_Yes_ Relatability
_Yes_ Fluency
_Yes_ Powerful Beginning
_Yes_ Powerful Middle
_Yes_ Powerful Ending
_Yes_ Connecting Ideas
_Yes_ Interesting Idea Behind Piece and/or a Message Behind Piece
_Yes_ Interesting In General (Does Not Bore) -
These 13 words were well deserving of the golden trophy.Congratulations for a job well done.
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A heartfelt message my dear. A great write deserves a gold trophy. Congrats.
~Kystal angel
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Wow.. I really like your word choice and can't help but look for hidden meanings in this work. Its very well written and is beautiful to read, best of luck.
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Wow, this was just stunning!
Thanks for your entry
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I love the imagery of emotional release..maybe also hidden meanings?
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I really liked this. The title caught my eye. The last line is my favorite (Recycling tears) I love it. Great job...good luck in the contest.
Hugs,
Cheryl
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really nice
recycling tears.
such a great line.
good luck in the contest.
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