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Again Small Crimes

 
XI.

Ptolemy wasn't guilty

he didn't plan the deed

arc of blue above the pyramids
sky aswarm with vultures


lost, the army struggled
clogged tight with sand

the air was a wall
you had to climb


no sleep at night
heat baked our souls

evidence accumulated

the guides had been paid off

who knew

where the fuck we were


XI.

I blasphemed
and was branded

the Indians
Tuscaroras, Senecas or Onandagas

smiled in sympathy
scalps crawling on their rawhide

they danced like red dervishes
we smoked old leaves

past deeds forgotten
sun set red as a bullet hole

eyes dry as toast
began to weep

fire water please, I stammered
in their difficult tongue

Holy Water
will be the death of me


XII.

Down deep in the belly
of the Admiral's flagship

the plan was hatched
a rotton egg of ingratitude

vile betrayal
in the billows of the following sea


the Horn battered us days and nights
tops'ls blew their grommets

prancing, blue blood officers
denied the Wrath of God

ordered hornpipes danced
ordered triple grog disbursed

below In hammocks
violently swaying

we discussed our plan at length
until, with an ease we weren't expecting

we slipped like stones
beneath an awesome sea



XIII.

Bones kept rattling

in the steamer trunk

Masie said she couldn't sleep
I could hear her rapid breath

took the wrong road between
Lafayette and Vilanow

trees thick as bamboo
blocked the sun

I kept checking my pocket
making sure it was there

cold comfort after all this time
in the rearview I looked like death

where was the god damned town!
I made a desperate turn

Masie laughed at something
neon exploded in our face


XIV.

In the bleachers no one paid attention
what he did was in the bag

Blond haired nubiles

danced on the dugouts

the short stop never looked
in their direction

at eight pm the lights came on
the scoreboard became a Christmas tree

fireworks bloomed all over town
the celebration was spectacular!

just an old brown paper bag
no one on the clean up crew

had any idea
the sins and emissions he'd left behind


XV

They didn't navigate like most things
but drifted, dandelion light

when the suns are both at zenith
they seemed haloed in gold

why did they purge them, you ask
they harmed no one

My mother can remember fields
carpeted thick and the smell,

the smell she said was enough
to make you crazy

no more
no more

there was blood in the air for awhile
but that's how life is

the young always

devour the old

 

 

 

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  • malmadre gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    So many images flashing through this and the brief lines come on like fast forward, this is great! you have some well chosen lines here..


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    June 15, 2008

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    there are no small crimes, only small criminals...lol

    this is excellent David, you poetry continues to impress and inspire... the final lines are chilling


    al


  • edgar allen matt
    June 15, 2008
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    bravo


  • smoke and ale
    June 14, 2008
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    It's very like reading a soldier's account of some ancient campain (as a series), except instead of fighting through wave after wave of oncoming phycological/physical assult it seems to be his hard-hunched grudge through life. Surprisingly entrancing, I enjoyed reading your account of the narrator's personal fronteer. Great work :^)


  • WolfHeart silver member
    June 14, 2008
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    Splendid poem!! The longest I have seen you write. I love historical poetry.

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