An introduction to how my feelings feel:
A day i wished once before to meet the one i know now
Where have you been? I ask and wonder and dream...
One bad situation with the immature has lead to this
A good situation with the most pure and kind
Hopefully i have not turned a blind eye to the blind side
As i will always stay truthful with wide eyes clear from blind lies
The grace of a model, true to herself in every sense of the word
Eyes so beautiful, that jealously envelops the core of our very sun
Lips so soft, that the angels rid themselves of the wings that should really be hers...
With a smile that shines so bright that the moon must take absence in a clear sky
The figure of a statue, Athena herself has to reprove her worth to the other Gods
A heart that represents the souls of an entire nation, lead by a patriarch of warmth
A feeling that cant be described, put into over a hundred words of balladry
The blood that flows within the veins of my frame
Allow me to withstand the pain, all of the thunder and lightning in the rain
My mind has become a new home; inhabiting the thoughts of her...
My heart has become an apartment for her to come and stay...
Day to night to day, the cycle that this life operates through
You with me with you, the cycle I always want to be running through
Complex yet simple, deep yet shallow; opposites attract
Forever is a long time, as the heart grows old yet fonder
Statements of love are taken for granted as everyone depicts false pictures of trust
The mystery and twisted fun of not knowing exactly what will happen next
Truly makes this love worth loving, this hug worth hugging, this kiss worth kissing...
Believe what is to be believed and the truth will be revealed
I love you
Author notes
For those who fall in love in a short period of time...yet it means so much to both. This was for someone I fell in love with very recently.
A contest entry
- .•¤**¤•. Love .•¤**¤•. by XBeautiful MistakeX.
550 points, ended August 4, 2008, 31 entries
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550 points, ended July 31, 2008, 14 entries
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700 points, ended August 22, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Someone you love by glitterydoom.
950 points, ended August 26, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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wow this was amazing, it just blew me away!
Thankyou for entering my contest and good luck
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its so crazy how love can just be there..Even if its only been a day! I love this piece!! Thank you for entering!!
oz -
Thanks for entering this into my contest. This is a beautiful poem. It was a joy to read. I wish you much luck.
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Great i like this alot. This is very well written. "One bad situation with the immature has lead to this
A good situation with the most pure and kind
Hopefully i have not turned a blind eye to the blind side
As i will always stay truthful with wide eyes clear from blind lies" that was worded so well. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly -
This is really good!
You paint such a vivid picture!
I really like it
Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck!
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This is my favourite
I've only read a few of you're poetry so far, and i wasn't going to comment untill tomorrow, [because of parents lol], but i just had to comment this one. This has to be my favourite!
In every stanza, you manage to include such detail that the picture is almost vivid as i read through.
''The blood that flows within the veins of my frame
Allow me to withstand the pain, all of the thunder and lightning in the rain''
^ the quote that stands out to me the most.
You really deserve more comments on this write than what you already have, i think people glance at the quantity of writing instead of the actual writing.
But, this whole poem was simple amazing if i'm honest.
x
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still love it
i think this was the first poem i ever read of yours...and i still love it. i want to copy and paste the best parts...but i can't. there are sooo many. i still love that second stanza.
"statements of love are taken for granted"
how things change...
yep, it's still as good as i remember it being =)
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