You are the light of my life
My lamp that brightens my night
You are the reason my life is whole
beauty shines within my soul
You are half of my heart
My reason my life does not fall apart
Author notes
Credit picture please : Lonely Lamperina by: Zach Virgilio
40 words
A contest entry
- PIF Picture/ 15 poets-40 words by jasminerose.
900 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A very sweet and soulful piece of penning. Nice take on the image prompt!
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A very heartfelt piece you have shared in my contest!
So much love and devotion just spills from your pen!
Lovely in flow and rhyme!
Thank you so very much for your beautiful entry!!
Linda
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This flows really well..So gentle and full of love..
All the best!
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I like the line "you are half of my heart", a very nicely composed poem, good rhyme structure. Perhaps the interpretation of the prompt image is a little too literal - but having said that it is a challenging image to draw inspiration from. Good luck to you also.
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. A terrific creation for the contest. best of luck
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Liked the light of your life, brightening your night, your life's wholeness and soul's shine within, held together by the one who is half your heart.
Very gentle and adoring entry.
Marlene
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