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i just happened to watch my man walk away from me on June 8th 2008 and he wont be walking back into my life until September 2009...
COME HOME SAFELY 46TH ENGINEERS AND 126TH FINANCE! HOOAH!!!
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A contest entry
- military wives, gf. fiances, families..how do they feel? by camo.egg.army.gurl.
1350 points, ended June 21, 2008, 106 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Liked the way you lined up the words - although to be honest, this was a bit short to have much of an impact on me -
I mean, you titled it, and then wrote the general meaning of the poem from the title but ... just those three words ... while they were strong, they didn't hit me as hard as they could have if perhaps there had been maybe two verses to it or something..?
Thanks for entering
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This was okay, it just didn't have an impact on me.
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I like the way you wrote it I havn't seen anyone on here write it that way before, hope you and your boyfriend are doing well
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i like how you changed your format is says so much more like this
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thanks i am about to add a few slide shows to my notes if you want to look at them...
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Wow this poem really has an impact on me, i love how you have said so much in three wonderful words, you know i realate to this very well, i join you in saying come home safely not only to your man, but to all of our soliders. good luck in the contest and as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy
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I ONLY PUT THE TWO UNITS THAT I CARE THE MOST ABOUT BUT YOU KNOW I CARE ABOUT ALL MY BROTHERS AND SISTERS IN ARMS..I WANT THEM ALL COME SAFELY TOO *HUG*
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