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He will survive

A broken wing
a broken leg
watch him soar.

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Beautiful Bird

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  • Lowell Poe
    July 16, 2008
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    Nobody really picked up
    on how profound these words were.
    With all our foibles and inadequacy's,
    there are those who
    reach heights above
    and beyond anyone's dreams...
    Beethoven was blind...
    If I knew the way,
    i would take us home brother,
    we are all perfect in his eyes,
    one day we will all understand.

    Great job my friend,
    LOWELL POE


  • Swan song gold member
    June 23, 2008
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    very good the bird does look a bit haggard thank you for entering

  • goalsv
    June 15, 2008
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    Excellent job with the prompt.


  • KayJay
    June 14, 2008
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    Nice imagery and a great display of the strength of nature... Best of luck.
    Ken

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