Allseeing eye
rises
through salient sky
soaring
seeking
searching
witnessing in its wandering ways
exploring eternal
invading infinite
utilizing universal
sailing its streams
of watery thought
into flowing form
of futures free
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended July 2, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
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Very thought provoking and inviting to the readers mind...deep and moving with lovely flow and meaning...thank you for sharing!
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Thanks Mystic!
I was trying for deep. Thank you for recognizing that attempt.
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This feels quite spiritual to me..the wonders, being one with the universe, nature and what's around us. I may be wrong. Made me think.
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Thanks honeybuns!
Sweetie, you got my back. You are a friend.
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Thought provoking poem you have written here
The searching to the future
Good luck in the contest
Julie
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Thank you, Julie!
Your kind words are appreciated. What wonderful things are happening in your life and writing. Anything, you'd like me to look at?
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