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~Brown Eyes~

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Her eyes, looking about
With warm, assuring tones
Of brown and white.
Sweetly moving her hair;
Flowing in the air like the whispers
Of a gentle breeze.
Caring shown in her hands.
Calling out to you-
Asking you? how?
A sweet understanding
Shown in those eyes;
Yearning to be watched
Delighting in pleasure-
Needing love-
Wanting love-
And safeness in your arms



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  • BabyBun silver member
    June 19
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    Great entry good luck
  • I must be the opposite because i also have brown eye. This is a very melo poem. Nicely sounding when you read it. Love is on the way brown eyes. Good write grace and luck in the contest.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 14
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    Lovely.

    Thanks for sharing, much love.

    -Timothy