darkness rises
light dies
darkness bring your nightmares to life
light brings you dreams to life
light warms are souls
darkness brings holes
when the darkness rises the light dies
when the light rises the darkness cry s
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The meaning held within the words is very good. But honestly, I think it can use a little bit of tweaking. Not for the context itself, but to make it flow more smoothly. You said you write music, so you know how to get a flow going. Use the same mind set to write poetry, afterall, poems are merely written music of the soul.
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i dont know if its good first poem
first poem
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