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                            Promised?

A contest entry

-Razors like morphine to the wrist of an addict.

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  • February Moon gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    I think this would be more powerful if it weren't portrayed as a question, but as a statement. I did like this though.


  • Kari gold member
    June 17, 2008

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    Promizes are so very important! People don't realize how important they are until someone they know breaks one with them!
    Best of luck in the contest.


    Kari


  • XNevermindX
    June 15, 2008
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    Ouch, those three words are painful to read, really painful.


  • tainfinite
    June 14, 2008
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    taiinfinite

    ouch this one hurts, well done good luck


  • never in his arms
    June 14, 2008
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    cool
    but ...
    painfull.

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