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Real men stay

 

 

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There's a difference between real men and the cowards that call themselves "men". This is it.

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  • AndNowWhat
    June 27

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    I love this.
    Anonymized sucks because I want to see more of your work... and I can't. Maybe after the contest.
    Best of luck!


  • Saint Irial
    February 8

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    It's easy to say that, but to be perfectly honest, a real man is not a fool. He will admit when a problem is bigger than he is, and when the person he wants to stay with, needs to work out her problems alone or together with someone else. Someone else and not him.

    This is but one example, I'm sure you can find more. I suppose you are a girl... what do you expect from "A real woman"?

    • Actually, no I am a guy. And if a person can't be with someone, even amongst their problems, they shouldn't be together.

      Your personal philosophy sounds like one of a coward.

      • Saint Irial
        February 8
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        who said it was my personal philosophy? and who are you to judge me? It's a matter of respect, and in some aspect desperation for anothers well being.

        • Well if you are going to state it as you did, once can assume it's what you believe. And if it's another's well being at hand, that's another story and can be taken into account when and/or if it occurs.

          But I stand by my statement as being correct. And considering all the other commenters have agreed with me, I think that should say something about your comment.


          • Saint Irial
            February 8
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            You're kinda lame, I feel inclined to not care enough to continue this, have a nice day oh christian.


  • Boris Plotz gold member
    February 7
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    it is agreed, and especially with your author notes.

    totally, completely and utterly.


  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 7

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    I agree wholeheartdly with this! So much and so often men run away from their problems. It truly is a shame. I was lucky enough to be blessed with a "real man" although sometimes I think he is more of a boy! *looks at her husbands Star Wars figureines* *nod* You spoke the truth here! Wonderful job!


  • movedon
    July 24, 2008
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    amen


  • February Moon gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    I like this.


  • Kari gold member
    June 16, 2008

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    Yes, I really agree with you there. Real men do stay and try to work things out. I wish there was more "real men"

    Best of luck in the contest.


    Kari


  • breakdown-beatdown
    June 15, 2008
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    so so true


  • Aerden gold member
    June 15, 2008
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    Amen!


  • Blackbird Writer
    June 14, 2008
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    I. Love. It.


  • Mistress Masquerade
    June 14, 2008

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    Three words... The very powerful words. Just wow. Best of luck in this contest, I love how its not cliche at all.


  • peridotPixi
    June 14, 2008

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    i really love this choice of wonderful words that say so much and it deffinatly has an impact on many people who read this poem, i wish you the best of luck in the contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy


  • KateMadness
    June 14, 2008
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    Wow

    That was well said.
    And very true.


  • Night FireWolf
    June 14, 2008

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    For three words, you sure said a lot. I agree, and I can see you and I have a lot in common. Good luck in the contest.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    June 14, 2008
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    right on!

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