To taste you would be so bittersweet.
I'd be addicted to you, like I am to coffee & sugar.
And I'd kiss your lips to get my fix,
and pull your hair cause I know you like it.
I'D SCREAM A VERSE
CAUSE I KNOW IT TURNS YOU ON.
IT MAKES YOU CRAZY; IT MAKES YOU SANE.
IT COURSES AND SURGES THROUGH YOUR VEINS.
IT MAKES YOU WANT SOMETHING I'M WILLING TO GIVE.
I'd like to know what else turns you on,
so I can put your wiring in my socket.
And maybe I've got the hand you'd take in marriage;
You just gotta retrieve it from my pocket.
I'm thinking of you when I'm at the store,
Scanning the codes, begging credit or debit.
And you can have my card, here, baby, just take it.
All you gotta do is slide it in.
Its been another cold day
In the middle of fucking May,
And I wish it hadn't passed so quickly,
So that maybe I could have had u with me…
But if I'm in too deep,
would I have made an effort at all?
And if I try too hard,
would you make it worth the effort doll?
And if I play too long,
would you remember I won your attention once upon a time?
But if I lose myself in you,
would I really have learned my lesson at all?
To rate you would be a damn shame,
because I can't put a number on what you do to me.
And would I lick my lips in anticipation
or because they're dry and need yours on my?
So you're like a disease, got me laid up in bed.
You're the fever I caught on that April night.
I'd rather be love sick the rest of my life, baby
Than to have a cure from feeling this right.
I'm phobic, crazy,
paranoid, abused,
neurotic, psychotic,
And my only sanity is you.
You're my pill, my kilo, my line, my smoke,
my needle, my poison, my sugar--
and what I wouldn't give, lick, suck, blow,
taste, nibble, kiss or screw to get more of it.
I'm begging for more of it.
Let me hold you for a little while.
I promise not to hold you down.
I'll just wrap my love around you with a smile,
And seal our perfect silence with a kiss or two… or more.
I'm in too deep,
and I didn't make an effort at all.
I tried too hard.
Will we even last a second, doll?
I played too long,
but now I'm tired, and needy for your attention;
Cause I lost myself in you, baby,
and I didn't learn a damn thing at all.
I lost myself in you,
Don't care about another damn thing at all.
Author notes
i think this is actually more of a song... i'll probably end up putting some chords to it eventually.
[I'd stare at the sun for you, allow myself to go blind, because your face is etched in my mind anyway]
7. love again. :-D
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Make it a song
"You're my pill, my kilo, my line, my smoke,
my needle, my poison, my sugar--
and what I wouldn't give, lick, suck, blow,
taste, nibble, kiss or screw to get more of it.
I'm begging for more of it".
That's my favorite part, probably because I can relate to that situation more. Yeah I think this could be a song, would love to hear it if you do put it to music. -
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did it :)
I have actually
teehee since i wrote it i have. i haven't recorded it yet though. one day next week when i'm off i'll record it and find a way to get it to you. i'll warn u. i'm an acoustic machine. lol if you don't like the somber acousticy stuffs u may not like me lol thanks for the compliment tho
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This was really Awesome.
So Random. But yea (:
Read mine too thanks.
Byes
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i liked the caps part too.
and the hairpulling -
I really like this, it made me smile in a strange way, you're baring your soul and it's making me laugh, not at you, just to know I'm this crazy about my boyfriend >.<
*finalist*
I love how you wrote the second stanza in capitals, I loved this stanza:
'So you're like a disease, got me laid up in bed.
You're the fever I caught on that April night.
I'd rather be love sick the rest of my life, baby
Than to have a cure from feeling this right.'
Tis was great
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