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Hope

Old Gods die as new ones rise,
To take their seat in starry skies.
Casting dreams out into space,
For men of hope to seek and chase.

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  • PawPrint
    June 16, 2008
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    C'mon, there has to be more!

    You can't get away with just one brilliantly-rhymed stanza for this piece baby!

    Gimme an epic


  • queen Moderators member
    June 16, 2008

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    welcome To all poetry

    Hi Cthulolz

    I like your poems, they ring true
    Well done poet

    Please keep writing, reading and commenting

    Barbara
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