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Change is up to you

I've noticed how things in one's life becomes so easy to tarnish
I've witnessed one who thought they had it all
But woke up one morning missing a whole portion of their life

I know there are alot of ppl who envy celebrities
And everything they have
But those same ppl don't really understand what it took for those celebrities to be who they are today

Sitting on your ass everyday will not get you where you want to be
Even working everyday doesn't get you where you want to be sometimes
But having that passion for something that you truly want is a very important step

Just thoughts lingering in my mind
Thought I'd express them

Life is Life

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  • Mattastically
    October 15

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    Cool As Ice

    This is really awesome. I'm part of the sitting on your ass everyday crowd. It really isn't getting me much besides pain and misery. But truth be told, it's given me a lot of insight into myself and mysoul. Good write keep it up!

    ~*Black As Ice*~


  • cgirl0410
    February 27
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    This is deep. And so true! People are steady looking up to people who have no business being role models. You have to live for yourself and just do you. That's the only way to every be fulfilled with yourself. Preach, girl. This was excellent! - cgirl0410


  • Kim
    July 22, 2008

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    Thanks for sharing those lingering thoughts with us. All are so very true. No matter how hard you work for something, if you're not passionate about it; that takes all of the fun out of achieving it. May God bless you and yours, my sistah.

  • Time focus on Me
    June 30, 2008
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    Hey sis

    I totally agree with this. Great job. and great emotions..


  • Jamaica
    June 26, 2008

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    Since your a true poet I'm gone put you on to this not everyone will see it:

    www.geocities.com/soul.poetry

    The Only Real Poetry, Is Soul Poetry

    Only Real Poets Come To A Place Like This, SO DONT WASTE YOUR TIME!

    Soul Poetry is a non-profit organization out there to help others to just get the word out. And not screw everyone else over like poetry. com has done over so many years. Telling everyone that there poem has won a contest that never exsisted. And telling them to buy their book for $50 or more. But see our book is free. You don’t pay for nothing. I pay out of my own pocket. What is their to loose? I can’t really steal your poetry what would I use it for?

    Soul Poetry is commited for poets. It was made by poets, for poets, and it is published by poets. Every poet knows that they want to get their word out to someone. So why not start here. This organization is still small but it will grow over time. We need decicated poets and writers like yourself. To help us grow. All I need is 200 poems to publish in our first book. Each poet will have their own page to use. For their poem, and a small biography giving them a little background information about yourself.

    So what do you say, is your poetry... Soul Poetry??
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  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 19, 2008

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    AMEN..

    True statements from a forward thinking mind. I like that, and I like this message! well done poetess.


  • forgotten voice
    June 16, 2008
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    so true well said

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