poised in fifth position
dark recesses giving way
to the call of light
electric contemplation
galvanizing the next step forward
movement of flowing currents pause
mid step
all veiled possibilities stir -
ghost potentials of unfolding preexistence
waiting
for a commitment
Author notes
~~~Picture credit : Lonely Lamperina by: Zach Virgilio
A contest entry
- PIF Picture/ 15 poets-40 words by jasminerose.
900 points, ended June 21, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Oh my what a fantastic take on the picture. So very well expressed. Congratulations on the gold. It was well deserved.
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A very clever take on the image. Intriguing use of abstract thought and depth. Nicely penned!
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OOO I like where you went with this picture!!
Excellent imagery, metaphor and emotion!
Amazing piece you have penned here!
Thank you for entering!!!!
Linda
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i really love this, you have incoporated some wondeful dancing knowlage into this beautiful poem, i love the waiting for a commitment, it says so much and it very deep, i wish you the best of luck in this contest and as always keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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